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What's Wrong With "A Short History of Women," the Novel

The shortcomings of this kind of fiction.

The New York Times Book Review assigned a cover review in June to a book called A Short History of Women. Woohoo! Except that the book is actually A Short History of Women ... A Novel, by fiction writer Kate Walbert. What happens when a history of women gets presented as a novel? Well, it finally gets such a history onto the cover of the Times Book Review. But, I would argue, something is lost. Presenting history as fiction immunizes it from just the kind of analysis and criticism women’s history desperately requires.

Walbert is explicitly writing a version of feminist history. Her book begins with a self-sacrificing suffragette circa 1914 and ends five generations later with a Yale coed, class of ’11, carrying her well-loved copy of Kate Chopin’s lesbian coming of age story The Awakening. The story thus precisely parallels the Western feminist movement. Walbert acknowledges outright her debt to the great feminist cultural analysts Carolyn Heilbrun and Viola Klein. To tell a story of five generations of women, from the hunger striking vote-seeker to the bisexual Yale freshman, is to stand next to historians of the social and political movement we call feminism, unmodified.

It is a fraught stance. Plato set forth the perils of political fiction. Although his argument can be effectively disputed, at this point in feminist history, two of Plato’s criticisms of fictional political stories are particularly convincing. First, when a history is told as fiction, the writer is in complete control of the events and their meaning. Since only she knows the story she wants to tell, her version is immunized from criticism. Second, fiction operates through emotion, and such emotional appeals have a powerful effect on the reader. Consumers of fiction weep and laugh and are taken out of themselves as they encounter the imagined world. This, too, pushes rational argument to the margins. With the obvious formal inequalities behind it (legal marital rape, sex-segregated want ads), and with access to resources and some social legitimacy, feminism faces many crucial decisions about what direction to take next. A history distanced and protected from criticism and rational argument is the last thing the feminist movement needs.

A Short History opens with the matriarch, Dorothy Trevor Townsend, starving herself to death for suffrage, the ultimate political act. Walbert presents Townsend’s act from the viewpoint of her daughter, about to become an orphan. Despite her personal peril, the daughter says calmly, “Grandmother claim[ed] it was just like Mum to take a cause too far.” With the very next line, and in exactly the same affect-free tone, the narrator gives us the other side: “Mother said she had no choice.”

There were real historical martyrs for suffrage a hundred years ago—Mary Clarke is generally thought to have died of a broken blood vessel from force-feeding during a hunger strike, and suffragette Emily Davison killed herself by running in front of the King’s horse at the Epsom Derby. Historians have studied and debated their acts ever since.

Tags: a short history of women, alix kates shulman, charlotte bronte, jane eyre, kate walbert, memoirs of an ex prom queen, the princess, women’s history

Linda Hirshman writes "The Princess" column for Double X and is the author of Get to Work: A Manifesto for Women of the World. Before she retired, she taught Philosophy and Women’s Studies at Brandeis University.

Comments

Ditto Meg Gordon

By: closetpuritan | Thu, 09/10/2009 - 15:35

It's been about 10 years since I read "The Awakening", too, but I would think I would remember any lesbian parts. Actually, it wasn't a "coming-of-age" story, either; the main character had been married for several years, and I believe had a couple kids.

Agree that

By: Jamessmall | Fri, 09/04/2009 - 17:10

Totally Agree that Kate Chopin's "The Awakening" isn't a lesbian coming of age story.
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The Awakening

By: meggordon.ny.1984 | Tue, 07/07/2009 - 12:07

I haven't read "The Awakening" in almost ten years, but I'm pretty sure it's not a lesbian coming of age story. I remember a dissatisfied married woman having an affair with a man. She was unsatisfied with her life as a mother/wife and also unsatisfied with her affair so she committed suicide. Perhaps you were thinking of "The Well of Loneliness?"

Criticizing Fiction

By: cb713 | Tue, 07/07/2009 - 07:07

I disagree with the premise that historical fiction is immune from analysis and criticism. Especially for a novel like Kate Walbert's that seems to encapsulate the feminist movement, it should be examined for the kind of picture it's painting of feminism and feminists. Did she produce an accurate representation of the various time periods? For the characters living then? For the situations she put them in? And so on.

Walbert created a universe and filled it with characters with their own reasons and thought processes. With any story, you can and should talk about the universe the writer created, the people that live there, what they do and think because the writer does have a point of view, a purpose. And the reader can have a completely different take on a story than what the author intended. Stories are like history that way. There's a million different ways you can interpret a set of events involving a million different kind of people that's being studied/read/talked about by another million different people with their own points of view. Just because a story isn't "real" does not exempt it or it's writer from criticism.

Kate Chopin's "The Awakening"

By: sara26 | Tue, 07/07/2009 - 01:40

Kate Chopin's "The Awakening" isn't a lesbian coming of age story.

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